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SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sat Mar 16, 2013 2:19 pm

=Information=
Name:Stick N Stones
Species:Earth Pony
Gender:Male
Age:45
Occupation:Currently Unemployed
Vice:An extreme hatred for Griffons
Special Talent:Killing
Minor Talents: Abnormally strong, Shrewd negotiator, very intimidating, proficient with bludgeoning weapons
Alignment: Rebels

=Appearance=
Height: 5ft
Coat Color:Brown
Mane/Tail Color:Beige
Eye color:Blue
Cutie/Glyph Mark:Broken Skull (Usually covered with clothes)

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=Bio=
Personality: Sticks N Stones is prone to sudden, violent bursts of anger when he is provoked. He enjoys hurting other living things a little, but loves to harm griffons. It is important to note that Sticks has an extreme and irrational hate of griffons, one that is so extreme and developed that he will go out of his way to cause their suffering. This hate is not caused by any tragic or traumatizing experience in his life, he just hates things that are different. If he lived in a different time, he would probably hate unicorns or pegasi.

Other than his sadistic tendencies, Sticks happens to enjoy reading poetry, breeding parasprites, and listening to classical music. He writes some poetry, badly. His best friend is a grey parasprite with red spots that he painstakingly bred for sterility and color. Its name is Pebbles, and he treats it like his baby. His favorite composer is Midnight Sonata.

Deep down inside, buried in his subconscious, SticksNStones feels regrets for his sins, but has never acknowledged them before. If these regrets were to be somehow brought to the forefront of his mind, there is no telling how he would react.

History: Sticks N Stones was born to a nice pair of earth ponies who lived in Fillydelphia. When he was eight years old, he found a rabbit den nearby his cottage. He blocked the exit holes, filled a bucket with water, and flooded the den. He would often kill or torture animals when he was younger, which worried his parents greatly. When he turned ten, his parents moved to a small, rural community in the Haysead Swamps. There, he spent his time finding more, exotic animals to mutilate. When he was twelve, he was attacked in the swamps by a child whose dog he had killed. After a prolonged fight, he killed the boy by using his superior strength to crush in his chest. He hide the body by tossing it into the bog. Later, he would discover that he had earned his cutie mark. When the child's family began asking questions about their missing child, Sticks invited them to his home, where he locked them inside and proceeded to burn down the house. Afterwards, he left town for Dodge City, which at the time was a small settlement.

For most of his life, Sticks N Stones rode in a gang that terrorized the west for decades. A few years before the beginning of the war he moved to Manehatten to join one of the prominent gangs that controlled the city, who he worked for until the griffons took the city and crushed the underground crime organizations. Ever since then, he has waited until the right moment to join the rebellion.

Special Skills/Abilities/Spells Descriptions: Abnormal strength(Can lift over 150 lbs), Expert in hiding bodies, Expert in killing anything, Expert in parasprite care and breeding, Proficient with Bludgeons(Uses a stone blackjack in fights. His style focuses on breaking bones by using his exceptional strength, but his attacks are slow and leave him open to counter-attacks.)

Personal Timeline:
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Last edited by SticksNStones on Fri Apr 05, 2013 12:44 am; edited 8 times in total (Reason for editing : Fixed a few things in the personality, added a weakness, and scaled down his strength.)
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 3:26 pm

I don't know how long it usually takes for a character sheet to be approved, but I have been waiting awhile, and I saw that two other character sheets have been approved while I've waited.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by Grayscale on Sun Mar 17, 2013 4:30 pm

To get your CS approved you need to edit the title. Change the "WIP" to "complete" and a mod/admin will approve it, if everything is fine.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 8:24 pm

Thanks. I'm still pretty new to this, so I appreciate the help.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by Steel Strike on Sun Mar 17, 2013 9:21 pm

So a few concerns.
1) A parasprite that eats flesh? Seems just a tad op to me. "Paraspriteattack their face!"
2) That's quite a bit of strength. Maybe need to tone it down a bit.
3) Perhaps a few "Debuffs" or something that makes your characterhave flaws and makes him vulnerable. ^^

Also, fair warning. Rebellion won't be griffon exclusive forever if you catch my drift.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:36 pm

Thanks. Sorry, I just guessed at what a normal draft horse would be able to lift and went with that. I'll just tone it down to 200lb. Also, I'm not entirely sure what kind of weakness to use. Do you have any suggestions?
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:43 pm

Ok, I decided to just tone down his strength to 250lb, but I added that he is dependent on magical-steroids to keep it. I also made it so that his parasprite no longer eats flesh. You were right, that is a bit odd. I think I'll probally make his withdrawal symptoms a little more extreme. Maybe he loses intelligence as well?
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 10:49 pm

Ok, so now withdrawal weakens his body and mind, and will eventually kill him. I hope that works, if not just tell me; I'll be happy to work this character so that he fits in with the RP.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by Steel Strike on Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:02 pm

Alright. I'm a bit iffy on magical steroids. So how about this. Make him proficient in a weapon type, so that he's not absolutely powerful. And maybe add a debuff. A weakness. Something like he uses a style with his weapon that strikes fast but can be overcome quickly due to requiring a lot of energy. Or maybe another weakness he could have. You can keep him a sadist though, and your reason for hating Griiffons is plain and simple, I love that part. Just need to keep him at an appropriate level for his cruelness.

(Also his hatred for Griiffons may not be well suited for the Rebels soon, so that's something to look forward too ^^)
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Post by SticksNStones on Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:37 pm

Ok, so I removed the parts about him being addicted to steroids(That probably was a bit dark, even for a post-war city RP), made it so that he uses a stone blackjack when he fights (His style is slow, but powerful. Somepony could easily counter his attacks, but they would be really hurt if he managed to hit.), and I put in a potential Achilles' heel. I don't really want Sticks to be a long-lasting character, so I'm kind of hoping that, when the griffons start joining in on the rebellion, he'll start some crap and ending up being killed. And I hope it'll be his own fault.
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Re: SticksNStones [EarthPony]

Post by Steel Strike on Sun Mar 17, 2013 11:43 pm

Alright. I think it's acceptable now. Accepted

Should head over to theChatbox
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