Jennabelle [Griffon]

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Jennabelle [Griffon]

Post by Jennabelle on Sun Oct 21, 2012 9:35 am

=Information=
Name: Jennabelle
Species:Griffon
Gender:Female
Age: 11 years old
Occupation:Spy?
Virtue: Loyalty
Special Talent: Good in Battle
Minor Talents: (optional)Good at spying

=Appearance=
Height: (normal pony/zebra height 4', normal griffon height 5')5'
Coat Color:Gray and light purple
Mane/Tail Color:gray and light purple
Eye color:blue
Cutie/Glyph Mark: (ponies/zebras only)

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=Bio=
Personality:
Jennabelle is like the wind. She is soft, calm, and silent. But at times she can be rough or in the heat of the battle. She doesn't like to talk much and a little shy but once you get to know her, she is a loyal friend.

When she is not need, she tries to find a quiet place to gather her thoughts, away from everything to think aboout her life. She hates being a warrior and would much rather live a peaceful life.


History:

Jenna was born around the time this all started. Her parents died in battle so some of the Griffons raised her. They hid her and trained her until they new she could fight. When she was nine, they gave her a chance to fight. Jennabelle didn't kill antpony, but injured a few. That's when they decided she was ready.

Jenna never really liked fighting or war, and always wished that one day it would end. As she became older she dismissed the idea and became a loyal warrior. She doesn't like all the deaths and gore, but sucks it up, keeps her head high, and doesn't talk about it.

(Secretly, Jenna doesn't like to fight but does it anyway, afraid of what might happen if she doesn't)



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Re: Jennabelle [Griffon]

Post by Tracker Jack on Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:45 am

theres a bit you still need to edit before I can go over your sheet. zuberi already went over some of it but also with occupation the "?" isnt needed, on minor talents please remove (optional) , on the cute/ gluph mark remove what it says and put N/A, also you might want to make her a bit older. the war started 12 years ago so maybe make her 18 or 19? and edit where it asks for your height. thank you ^_^
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