Crying Soul [Griffon]

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Crying Soul [Griffon]

Post by Crying Soul on Sun Oct 28, 2012 8:21 pm

=Information=
Name:Crying Soul
Species:Griffon
Gender: Male
Age: 38
Occupation:Funeral Director
Vice:Lust - Crying Soul is very obsess with his work. Crying Soul frequently refers to the deceased as his "guests." or "angels." It is his hobby to groom and dress bodies of the dead. He is so obsess that he sleeps in a coffin with a dead body.

Special Talent:Scythe Proficiency - Crying Soul can wield a scythe with tremendous dexterity and skill, accurately and precisely slicing through his enemies without being hindered by the scythe's heavy weight.

Minor Talents:He is amazing at dressing bodies. Not only can he can cover any marks that indicates the cause of death, but he can make them seem alive.Such as restoring the luster in the mane and coat. Another thing he is good at is stopping decomposition of the body when there is oxygen around it. Since the common way to stop decomposition you have to remove all oxygen.


Alignment:Griffons

=Appearance=
Height: 6'0
Coat Color: Ivory coat with a Maroon underbelly.
Eye color:Lust - Lust is a rich shade of red.

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=Bio=
Personality:He tends to punctuate his words with sweeping gestures and creepy giggles and seems to spend a good deal of time inside of coffins with his "guests". Soul seems to take joy in frightening others, as he intentionally acts creepy to provoke a reaction.When living people come to visit him, he frequently asks if they came to see what it feels like to sleep in a coffin. He takes pride of dressing up his "guest" to make them look beautiful. Soul is not afraid of death considering the fact that he sleeps with them. He can be wise with talking about life and death, for him death is but the next great adventure.

Dealing with the rebellion issue, Crying Soul is committed to the empire, but not like other griffons who act like zealots and brag that there the most powerful race in the world. When he finds any pony that breaking curfew he would usually spook them rather then kill since it leaves a better impact on them. Since he thinks that death is not frighting.

History:

Crying Soul was born in a cemetery. His mother was a Funeral Director and his father was a priest.He was named Crying Soul due to the fact that he was born in a graveyard fulled with dead griffon warriors. Most of his childhood was mostly dull compare to other childhoods. He spent most of his time watching his mother dress the bodies. For some odd reason he was drawn towards the bodies and was caught numerous times sleeping in a casket. Due to his lack of friends, he grew a habit of pretending that the bodies are alive, even having an argument with them. When the war started he was enrolled into the military. He had a hard time since he did not feel right with a lot of weapons they have. Soul finally manage to find a weapon that suite him, an scythe. He became very talented with the scythe but he had a habit of doing little damage to a body so it would not be a huge mess when he try to dress it.

After the war he got out of the military to follow in his mothers paw steps. He moved his business to Manehattan, since the rebellion is stronger there. Meaning more bodies for him to dress. He does not really care about the whole rebellion because he finds it a bit pointless and annoying. Mostly due to the griffon acting like all powerful zealots.


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Re: Crying Soul [Griffon]

Post by Tracker Jack on Wed Nov 07, 2012 3:34 am

could you add a bit more to his history and his personality? its preffered if both are at least near two paragraphs each if you can. maybe add some more minor talents other then mauling if you can you dont have to describe how he mauls XD and if you could for his talent make it ariel combat and maybe find a way to take the description of his special talent you have now and find a way to make it work in his history or something. you have alot of stuff thats good just try moving it around a bit like the descriptions you have for your vice and talents and make them work in your personality and history somehow
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Re: Crying Soul [Griffon]

Post by Crying Soul on Wed Nov 21, 2012 12:48 am

OK i am done. I did a Funeral Director instead because being crazy, since it puts me in very bad position for role play. So i try to make him sane instead but have that unsettling tone that griffons have.Also for my Scythe Proficiency should i be more precise on what kind of fighting style it is?
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Re: Crying Soul [Griffon]

Post by Johan Tercel on Thu Nov 22, 2012 5:44 pm

I like it! One question about his minor talent; taking away oxygen out of the air around the body. How?
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Re: Crying Soul [Griffon]

Post by Steel Strike on Fri Nov 23, 2012 6:08 pm

Crying Soul wrote:OK i am done. I did a Funeral Director instead because being crazy, since it puts me in very bad position for role play. So i try to make him sane instead but have that unsettling tone that griffons have.Also for my Scythe Proficiency should i be more precise on what kind of fighting style it is?

Sorry no one on the moderation staff has gotten to you on this...It's fine, now I think. Also we need an Alignment bit up in the Information section, telling us whether your Rebel, Griffon, Neutral, or undecided.

Other then that, Approved, good sir.
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