Dawn Star [Pegasus]

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Dawn Star [Pegasus]

Post by Dawn Star on Tue Oct 23, 2012 10:57 pm

Name: Dawn Star

Race : Pegasus

Gender: female


Occupation:Former solider for the equestrian armed forces, Weapons Tactics/strategy expert

Virtue: loyality

Primary Color: Navy blue

Mane and tail color: yellow with red streaks

Eye color : light green

Special talent :Tactics

Minor talent: CQB and using different types of weaponry
Can see flash backs of events (mostly battles in the final days of equestrian rule) at random

Height : 4"3'

Cutie mark : a sheild with two crossed arrows in the back and a sword with two pairs of wings coming off it also known as Valkyrie

Cutie mark:

Bio: Dawn isn't very talkative pony she realise on her actions in the field to speak for herself.
Shy at times but with plenty of courage and bravery to back her up ...displays love and passion for her friends and squad members.. always helping them make it through these dark times they now live in
Friendly to all ponys and some giffions
A stubborn fighter especially with close courters combat
She never sees the impossible and Rarely surrenders
Dawn star believes in second chances..she always looking for light in the shadows above
..always moving forward towards a better future for herself, her friends and Equestria

Dawn star was born in manehattan 900 years after nightmare moons in prisonment
In the moon...a small pegasus filly but gifted with great intelligence most baby pegasi can fly at the age of 7 or 8
but dawn began flying at age of 2.Dawn lived in a family of five ..her mom,her dad,her older brother and her younger sister
Both parents are royal guards dawn and her mother,brother and sister live in a building in manehattan while dawn's father lives in the capital city of Canterlot for his duty towards the princesses after his wife became inactive to be in manehattan with dawn and the rest of her family .

Like all life you can't stay a filly forever thats no exception for dawn star
When dawn heard about cutie marks and special talents in school she was hooked instantly
And went to search for her special talent.But while all the other ponys found theirs ..dawn didn't she became abscessed with her mark that didn't exsit at time and how to find it.She spent her 6th and 7th years of living trying to find out who she was but after awhile she gave up and excepted at being a "blank flank".Her father saw this was upseting her so he enrolled her and her brother in the royal sisters cadet/recruitment camp to help her with a talent in the service .passing everything that was thrown at her but everything that she passed nothing was shown to represent her talent. Her last hope was a team simulation training exercise defend a point with non armed weapons being a little nervous dawn didn't know what to choose but out of luck she chose a sword and crossbow.With in the hour all of her team was out except dawn and her brother but a dum arrow hit dawn brother which declared out now dawn was by herself...completely out numbered but that didn't stop her she defend her point using minor combat skills with her sword and crossbow knocking out every cadet on the other team until the was one left ..another Pegasus with a cutie mark of two swords crossed.Becauses it was just dawn and cadet Tornado they both had two lives.It took awhile but tornado got hit with a dum arrow and a dum sword causing him to be declared as out and dawn claimed not only victory and a royal guard recruit qualifier but she also got her cutiemark ..and like other ponys that just discovered their cutiemark she let her joy out while leaving the training grounds .Knowing that she was to young for duty she could not be recruited into the guards ...but she didnt care because today was the day that would change her life ..forever.

fast forwarding to dawn teen years in which dawn worked at the
Clouds Dale weather creation factory for about four years waiting for an acceptes letter from Celestia or Luna to determen what devision she would be recruited into.After dawn discorved her cutie mark in a cadet school she always wanted to go farther in the service and become a guard to the princesses but it wasn't her decision to make ...it was the princesses choise to find out based on talent,teamwork and skill where she would be put ...Dayguards are the real guards by protecting and helping orther ponies with problems ...Nightguards are based on team work by using recon and scouting to blend into the night as shadows do...she couldn't wait ..but she had to ..which she did not like.After several mouths dawn got her letter from Princess Celestia
Stating that dawn was now a Dayguard recruited to the guards of the 767th now she was with her brother also a recruit of the 645th nightguards and her father a LT. of 445th nightguards ...it was a grand day ...but things were about to change

Dawn was an highly respected guard when she was promoted
to a corporal for her heroic action to give cover to the mane 6 against discord.
After discord was back in his stone prison once more dawn got a notice to move from her home in manehattan to the Canterlot Castle's barracks which wasn't that bad she made tons of new friends in her squad including a light blue unicorn that became her best friend.When dawn became a Sgt. She began leading 767th with her commanding officer with her in various missions basically security in Canterlot and ponyville.The rank of SSgt. was one she would never forget because a couple day after the wonderful new of the royal wedding was heard and the surprise changeling invasion on Canterlot was seen.After the whole ordeal dawn was quickly promoted to gunnery Sgt. her brother got the same rank pluse her father was promoted to captain
But this not a sign of a reward ....many battles had to be faught to keep Equestria safe during this amount of time but like all events they have a beginning and a end as fight continued a naboring kingdom was planing a campaign against Equestria.

After the heat of fighting died down thing went back to normal for dawns dutys
For a year or two.. but after being promoted to LT. things got weird.She noticed that Princess Celestia became restless when the griffion kingdom Stoped communicating with Equestria ...stoped trading with Equestria ...stoped coming to peace meeting in Equestria.Dawn was ordered by the princess to go and talk with there general and their king.
But before she could get a chance to go the giffion attacked and captured applelasso.This act called out betrayal for the giffion against Equestria and once again Equestria was at WAR..for the last time

Not much would be said ..war is war but dawn lead her squad with many others to retake applelasso and they did..with her squad members of the 767th,235th,445th,843rd and many other were able to push back the griffions as far as the east coast of Equestria.With the giffion vastly out numbered and located a click from their home Equestrian forces pushed the remaining giffions off Equestria ...this made the general very angry at Equestria so he led another campaign against Equestria a week later.Dawn wasn't scared ..Nopony was scared unfortanly the 767th was pulled out and replaced with a highly trained squad 121st and the 117th but to a shocking surprise to Equestria the surviver of the 121st and 117th were in full retreat with high casualties causing the griffions to recapture applelasso and prepare to capture other citys and towns near applelasso.Soon this happend to all the squads and more and more citys were lost ...until althat was left in equestria's control was ponyville,Canterlot and dawns home of manehattan..

With half of Equestria under giffion control and the giffion army moving towards Canterlot caused panic
And rage within the remaining squads a well as dawn.The princesses decided to defend Canterlot with their remaining forces
By send three sqaudrons 565th 455th and the rebuilt 121st to ponyville ..within 1 hour the squads were wiped out and the griffions controlled ponyville.Within minutes the battle for Canterlot started that lasted for days both sides were evenly matched by numbers and weapons but after while the equestrian forces started to crumble under the griffion army and with in days the city of Canterlot became a war zone with equestrian forces loosing ground.Finally the pincesses saw that the battle would not end in equestria's favor so Celestia and Luna fleed towards manehattan with dawns squad her brothers squad while her father and other held the giffions back ..that was the last time dawn would hear from her father.Thinking it would take a while for the griffion to take Canterlot would also give the remaining and surviving forces of Equestria time to regroup to take back Canterlot and the other citys but they were wrong griffion squadrons came in to make sure the princesses would not take Equestria back..but the griffion were met by the brave surviving forces loyal to Equestria rule and the last battle began.This battle lasted a for weeks close to three mouths with one side being pushed back and then pushing forward again but with the battle reaching it's third mouth and the war reaching it's second year it was obvious that Equestria was loosing and when Canterlot fell it was true Equestria rule was finished but outside of manehattan the fight continues.With the battle of manehattan nearing it's final days dawn squad and her brothers were Crumbling dawns brother led the princesses to the edge of the city while dawn and her surviving squad members stayed at the entrance .. it was just a matter of time now ..and it didn't take long the griffion rushed and took lives causing dawn and the last of her squad to retreat to an outpost that served as a base camp a few clicks outside the city.With hope lost dawn and her best friend and her last squad member where trapped but as quick as lightning the griffions stormed the outpost.Saying her final goodbyes know that the griffion would kill her if they were captured but dawn didn't care she insisted to fight until she was killed but her friend a unicorn that she met many years ago didn't want this to happen and used a preservation spell on dawn in which fell into a deep sleep with the world and the war moving with out her.

The war still rages making year 0 with the commander of the 212st ..blood red leading the charge trying to take the city's back..but with the princesses gone blood reds army failed like the one's before.Not much left to say ..manhattan was captured and the remaining members of the 767th were defeated and dawn brother was supposedly killed along with her family..at least that what griffion records say but the pincesses are gone and mane 6 have vanished the no hope ..nopony knows where dawn is ...she just vanished ..official griffion records actualy claim that she is dead.

It's been 4 years sence the griffion takeover and the preservence spell wears off former LT. of the now extinct 767th of the equestrian army sneezes and open her eyes to see a dark dusty old room.She slowly gets up on her hooves and looks around a little dazed and confused like she lost her memory of the day before darkness.She trotes over to a table in the middle of the room and looks down at a dusty roll of paper.Dawn looks at squinting to see what it says underneath 4 years of dust.She finally blows the dust off the roll of paper which revealed a butch of lines and marked areas some in red and some in blue it's a map of the of griffion movement in Equestria in the old times.dawn studies the some what familiar symbols and shapes that were in blue and then looked at the lines that were in red. For some strange reason she felt funny...like she needed to leave but she ignored this feeling and looked at the map again ..she heard hoof stepes and looked up and fell back in fear because she saw was a ghostly figure of a unicorn galloping every where around her looking and taking things.Dawn felt what she sees is important and once again she get the feeling to leave.She decided to follow the ghostly unicorn hoof steps by grabing the map an equestrian scoped crossbow,food and water, a set of Equestrian curved swords,Equestrian curved tip bolts,a dagger,some tools,her helment and a first aid kit..she puts all of these items in her official equestrian army saddle bags she strapped the swords to her sides, puts the crossbow holdster on her right side and her saddle bags on her back.She follows the unicorn that was in a hurry to get out of this dark room the ghostly phases though the metal doors dawn looks back for a second and then opens the doors and go outside.Once outside dawn can see the similarities of inside and outside dark,old,and dusty ruins of the battle ground the only difference was it was colder.Dawn exsamends the old pieces of wood,rusty armor plates,and rusty shields fragments she trots around looking for the unicorn but sees nothing except a tattered flag that reads"The Equestrian guards of 767th ..the light of the world" she looks at and tears the flag down to look at closely she looks back up and once again sees the ghostly unicorn that gallops outwords dawn turns the flag into a headband and follows the shadowy unicorn figure the city ...the city of manehattan

Equipment :wearing a worn battle damaged set armor(basically the chest plate, shoes, has helment but doesn't wear it)
And a tattered squadron flag that has been transformed into a headband
1 frist aid kit
Food and water
1 old war map
Old helment(in saddle bags)
Saddle bags

Weapons: 1 scoped crossbow(consealed in holdsters)
2 curved swords(consealed in holsters underneath saddle bags )
4 packs of curved tip bolts (one pack hags on her left back leg the rest are consealed in saddle bags )
Tools (in saddle bags)

Dawn Star's Theme

Appearance History

Flash Backs
?{FlashBack}?A Temple Of Steel And Stories (=Not Complete=)
Present Time
Oct 31,{DownTown} Morning: Amethyst Leaves (=Completed=)
Oct 31,{Park} Afternoon: Spectrum Of Healing (=Not Complete=)
Nov 4, {Park} Night: Random Encounter: Dinner (=Not Complete=)
Nov 5, {IndustrialDistrict} ? Beginnings,Endings And The Thread That Never Die (=Completed=)
Nov 5, {ResidentialDistrict East} Night: While The Iron's Hot (=Not Complete=)
Nov 5,{ResidentialDistrict West}  Night: Battle Scars (=Not Completed=)
Nov 27,{ResidentialDistrict West} Evening: Cold Shoulder (=Completed=)


Last edited by Dawn Star on Mon Jun 17, 2013 2:34 pm; edited 30 times in total
Dawn Star

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Join date : 2012-10-22
Location : Fruitport Michigan

Character sheet
Alignment: Rebel/Equestrian solider
Profession: War veteran solider / LT Commander of the ponys 20th Airborn
Age: 27

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